My English skills in 2009

My best written evidence:

Opinion essay

Nowadays the computers are the newest tecnology and the future of our society. Computer had been the revolution of our society, and thanks of them we can evolutionate our tecnology faster than ever we can imaginate.

Computers has been used for humans recently in the history of humans and we can say that it has been the best invent that never has been created in the world.
Comunication, knowladge, games, ... all tecnologies are based in computer programs that need the informatic to work and it has been an advantagde for us. The best example is the NASA, that this assosiaton of USA has been able to send satelites to space and get information to other planets and the machines are a real enginye of head. If tecnologies hadn't never created the computers, Im sure that we would never be able to do a lot of things.

In the way to comodities of our live, we can say that computers has been very important for us, but maybe the people has abused of that, and has converted them in a bad thing. That isn't true, people use them because maybe they have a problem, or they want to spent they time doing that, but the computers has made to get funny only a littles times and at first of all, to work.


My best oral evidence:









I think that my opinion essay has been one of the bestones I did, because I had some arguments that were very evidences and goods. Respect of my oral presentation, I choosed that one because I don't have any more recently, I think that if in the third term we did a oral presentation I would did better than the rest. So, I've showed you my "best works".

I think that considering my inicial level of English, we should admit that I did a big efford to pass the batxillerat and first of all, to improve my level of English. At first I had the idea to work in a company like that, so I knew what necessities we need to do, for get this job. I know that the company only wants reading English, in high level, but I thought that speech also was interesting so, I tried to improve it too.

FINAL REFLECTION

* Compare the first writtne document you produced (email to teacher) and your last composition.

Well, sincerelly I think that my writting has improved a lot and I'm happy to see how I progressed in this two years in Batxillerat. Maybe the madurity is better than before, it can be a condition of the "years" or time, everyone is in constant improving in that point. then there are other points that has influenced in my writting. For example the blog, the compositions that we did in class... The last writting that I did was in the final exam of the course.

At first I did a lot of mistakes of grammar and propositions, and now I only do about prepositions and there aren't to many mistakes about grammar.

* Compare your first oral presentation and your final oral presentation.

The first oral presentation I did was very diferent than the last oral presentation that I did, my level has improved, but not only to talk in English, but the way I can express myself in English infront of other people. I got nervous at the first oral presentation but in the lastone I was more relaxed, I could express very well( I think) and I answered with a very good fluency the questions of the students. My pronuntation has improved too, because It has been very important to get good mark. My mark hadn't been very high in the two oral presentations but I'm so happy to know that I passed the two (H).

Berlin rules out saving Opel jobs

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/8042509.stm

Germany can't afford the alt cost to get safe the company opel and safe the jobs of his workers. Fiat wants to buy Opel form General motors. Crisi is afecting the bussiness of all Europe and that aren't an exception.

Karl-Theodor zu Guttenberg said the government "had a obligation to deal responsibly with taxpayer's money".

If FIAT get succefully Germany will lose a big company.

Obama to address Muslims in Egypt

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/americas/8041226.stm

Barack Obama will do an speech to US relations with the Muslim world on a visit to Egypt, he will travel the 4 of June. It will be one day later than go to German. People says that Egypt is the heart of muslin states, and he will do this speech to get better relationship with them.

The objective of Obama is get better relation ship with arabic and muslim cultures and say that Us isn't in war with islam.

Button wins as Brawn GP dominate

http://news.bbc.co.uk/sport2/hi/motorsport/formula_one/8042675.stm

Jenson Button has won his 4 race in the competition. He is doing a great work in this championship and he is demostrating in a novicer team. His team is a inexperienced make and has won 4 races surprising Ferrari, McLaren and other teams. It is a new thing that has passed in the history of F1.

This sunday Jenson Button has won in the spanish gran prix and is the revelation in F1

'Steep rise' in Sri Lanka deaths

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/south_asia/8042341.stm

The Sri Lanka army has shelling the poblation in the zone and has killed 378 people according to the reporters of BBC. They has selling the civils in 24 hours and has injured aproximately 1200 people, and there are bodies in the beach and the streets. that situation is very conflictive and cruel.

The army, but, they says that they didn't shell the zone and denied this afirmations. But the zone has been banned by the soldiers and nobody can get information.

Corrected entry by my teacher

This is my last entry of this term, and I will tal about Carnival. Carnival is a tradition that nowadays has become a big Party for people, but especially for young people that enjoy every hour with the same energy than at the beginning of the party.

This year I've dressed as a tennist player. We enjoyed these last days a lot, we were really happy because it is a big party. At first, everybody went to Roses, and it was fantastic, the next day, we went to Roses again but this time to Chic deluxe, one disco of the zone.

The next week we went to Castello d'Empuries, but I only was there for one day because I had a lot of exams, and I was a little bit tired with the parties! xdd, and this last week, for the maximum kings of the party, was Fortia Carnival, but I wasn't the king of the party, I'm becoming old xd.