* Compare the first writtne document you produced (email to teacher) and your last composition.
Well, sincerelly I think that my writting has improved a lot and I'm happy to see how I progressed in this two years in Batxillerat. Maybe the madurity is better than before, it can be a condition of the "years" or time, everyone is in constant improving in that point. then there are other points that has influenced in my writting. For example the blog, the compositions that we did in class... The last writting that I did was in the final exam of the course.
At first I did a lot of mistakes of grammar and propositions, and now I only do about prepositions and there aren't to many mistakes about grammar.
* Compare your first oral presentation and your final oral presentation.
The first oral presentation I did was very diferent than the last oral presentation that I did, my level has improved, but not only to talk in English, but the way I can express myself in English infront of other people. I got nervous at the first oral presentation but in the lastone I was more relaxed, I could express very well( I think) and I answered with a very good fluency the questions of the students. My pronuntation has improved too, because It has been very important to get good mark. My mark hadn't been very high in the two oral presentations but I'm so happy to know that I passed the two (H).
domingo, 10 de mayo de 2009
Berlin rules out saving Opel jobs
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/8042509.stm
Germany can't afford the alt cost to get safe the company opel and safe the jobs of his workers. Fiat wants to buy Opel form General motors. Crisi is afecting the bussiness of all Europe and that aren't an exception.
Karl-Theodor zu Guttenberg said the government "had a obligation to deal responsibly with taxpayer's money".
If FIAT get succefully Germany will lose a big company.
Germany can't afford the alt cost to get safe the company opel and safe the jobs of his workers. Fiat wants to buy Opel form General motors. Crisi is afecting the bussiness of all Europe and that aren't an exception.
Karl-Theodor zu Guttenberg said the government "had a obligation to deal responsibly with taxpayer's money".
If FIAT get succefully Germany will lose a big company.
Obama to address Muslims in Egypt
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/americas/8041226.stm
Barack Obama will do an speech to US relations with the Muslim world on a visit to Egypt, he will travel the 4 of June. It will be one day later than go to German. People says that Egypt is the heart of muslin states, and he will do this speech to get better relationship with them.
The objective of Obama is get better relation ship with arabic and muslim cultures and say that Us isn't in war with islam.
Barack Obama will do an speech to US relations with the Muslim world on a visit to Egypt, he will travel the 4 of June. It will be one day later than go to German. People says that Egypt is the heart of muslin states, and he will do this speech to get better relationship with them.
The objective of Obama is get better relation ship with arabic and muslim cultures and say that Us isn't in war with islam.
Button wins as Brawn GP dominate
http://news.bbc.co.uk/sport2/hi/motorsport/formula_one/8042675.stm
Jenson Button has won his 4 race in the competition. He is doing a great work in this championship and he is demostrating in a novicer team. His team is a inexperienced make and has won 4 races surprising Ferrari, McLaren and other teams. It is a new thing that has passed in the history of F1.
This sunday Jenson Button has won in the spanish gran prix and is the revelation in F1
Jenson Button has won his 4 race in the competition. He is doing a great work in this championship and he is demostrating in a novicer team. His team is a inexperienced make and has won 4 races surprising Ferrari, McLaren and other teams. It is a new thing that has passed in the history of F1.
This sunday Jenson Button has won in the spanish gran prix and is the revelation in F1
'Steep rise' in Sri Lanka deaths
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/south_asia/8042341.stm
The Sri Lanka army has shelling the poblation in the zone and has killed 378 people according to the reporters of BBC. They has selling the civils in 24 hours and has injured aproximately 1200 people, and there are bodies in the beach and the streets. that situation is very conflictive and cruel.
The army, but, they says that they didn't shell the zone and denied this afirmations. But the zone has been banned by the soldiers and nobody can get information.
The Sri Lanka army has shelling the poblation in the zone and has killed 378 people according to the reporters of BBC. They has selling the civils in 24 hours and has injured aproximately 1200 people, and there are bodies in the beach and the streets. that situation is very conflictive and cruel.
The army, but, they says that they didn't shell the zone and denied this afirmations. But the zone has been banned by the soldiers and nobody can get information.
viernes, 1 de mayo de 2009
Corrected entry by my teacher
This is my last entry of this term, and I will tal about Carnival. Carnival is a tradition that nowadays has become a big Party for people, but especially for young people that enjoy every hour with the same energy than at the beginning of the party.
This year I've dressed as a tennist player. We enjoyed these last days a lot, we were really happy because it is a big party. At first, everybody went to Roses, and it was fantastic, the next day, we went to Roses again but this time to Chic deluxe, one disco of the zone.
The next week we went to Castello d'Empuries, but I only was there for one day because I had a lot of exams, and I was a little bit tired with the parties! xdd, and this last week, for the maximum kings of the party, was Fortia Carnival, but I wasn't the king of the party, I'm becoming old xd.
This year I've dressed as a tennist player. We enjoyed these last days a lot, we were really happy because it is a big party. At first, everybody went to Roses, and it was fantastic, the next day, we went to Roses again but this time to Chic deluxe, one disco of the zone.
The next week we went to Castello d'Empuries, but I only was there for one day because I had a lot of exams, and I was a little bit tired with the parties! xdd, and this last week, for the maximum kings of the party, was Fortia Carnival, but I wasn't the king of the party, I'm becoming old xd.
Exam writing: Influence of psychologist
Nowadays psychologists have been the best people in our society who have adviced us about personal problems. That's important and I think, necessary for our society. Thought problems can be solved easily or not, but normally they try to safe your mind. I think that they take a lot of working places in our country and that's why we need some studies of the mind before applying for a job, the way of your behaviour is studied too, and the principal goal of the pscycologist, is to make us gain confidence when we have personal problems and don't get crazy about that.
In conclusion, a lot of times we have had problems that have afected us very deeply in our minds and, it's true that maybe the society needs them but I think that if somebody is sad, he could spend this difficult step in his life with the company of one familiar or friend. They are only useful for analizing people, and very hard situations for example a murder, a crazy man, or simply the difficulties of learning a child.
mistake: before + -ing (prepositions are followed by verbs in gerund form)
In conclusion, a lot of times we have had problems that have afected us very deeply in our minds and, it's true that maybe the society needs them but I think that if somebody is sad, he could spend this difficult step in his life with the company of one familiar or friend. They are only useful for analizing people, and very hard situations for example a murder, a crazy man, or simply the difficulties of learning a child.
mistake: before + -ing (prepositions are followed by verbs in gerund form)
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